Review 2221: The Expendable Man

Young Doctor Hugh Denismore is driving through the California desert to Phoenix to attend a family wedding when he sees a teenage girl on the highway hitchhiking. He doesn’t want to pick her up but is worried she’ll meet with trouble on the deserted road, so he gives her a ride to Blythe, as he’s not about to cross the state line with her.

On the way, she tells him a pack of lies and claims to be broke, so he buys her a bus ticket to Phoenix when he drops her in Blythe and stops at a motel for the night.

To his dismay, when he reaches the Arizona border the next morning, she is waiting for him and asks for a ride to Phoenix. He drops her off at the Phoenix bus station, but later she finds him at his motel and asks him to give her an abortion. He throws her out.

He has a bad feeling about all of this, but why is he so worried? After her body is found murdered in a canal, his fears are confirmed and the reader realizes he’s a Black man. If the police find out he gave her a ride, he’s sure they’ll try to pin it on him. And they do.

Hughes builds up a great deal of suspense in this one, and she also vividly describes 1960s Phoenix. I have liked her way of introducing strong women in the two books I’ve read by her so far. In In a Lonely Place, two women team up to expose a serial killer, and in this novel, Denismore gets vital assistance from Ellen, another wedding guest. I also thought it was a brave and unusual choice at this time to have a Black protagonist. This is a real nail-biter.

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Day 674: In a Lonely Place

Cover for In a Lonely PlaceWhat makes this post-World War II noir crime novel stand out is that it was written by a woman and the crime is solved by two sharp women. Although there are plenty of women mystery writers, it is less common to find women writing noir mysteries at that time. Reminiscent of The Killer Inside Me, In a Lonely Place tells the story of a serial killer of women from the point of view of the killer.

Dix Steele is an ex-pilot being supported by his uncle in Los Angeles while he pretends to write a novel. He is living in a posh apartment of an old Princeton friend, wearing his clothes and driving his car and telling everyone his friend is in Rio. About once a month he picks up a girl at a bus stop or some other lonely place and strangles her.

Dix decides to get in touch with an old friend from the military, Brub Nicholai, but is taken aback to find Brub is now a police detective. Brub has also married, and his wife Sylvia doesn’t like Dix.

Dix meets an attractive redhead, Laurel Gray, who lives in the apartment complex and is divorcing her wealthy husband. Soon they begin a torrid romance.

This novel was convincing in its depiction of a serial killer. Although we see things from Dix’s point of view, we are not drawn into his dilemmas as we are, say, for The Talented Mr. Ripley. We want him to be caught and worry about Laurel or about the next time he is going to find the need to kill.

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