Here’s another book for Dean Street December!
I have read two memoirs by Frances Faviell, but The Fledgling is the third of her three novels and the first of her novels I’ve read. For me, It wasn’t as successful as her memoirs.
One reason is the main character. He is not very appealing. I’ll explain why later.
Neil Collins is serving his compulsory military service in 1950s England. This service was apparently controversial because the country was not at war.
Neil is a fragile, small young man who gets so nervous when ordered around or bullied—which he frequently is—that he gets stupid and can’t remember how to do things. He has already gone AWOL twice and has promised his grandmother he won’t do it again.
Everyone in his unit picks on him. He thinks he has one friend, Mike, but when Mike bullies him to desert, planning to follow him and use Neil’s contacts to get to Ireland, he realizes Mike has just been using him. So Mike bullies him more until he goes. Sexual abuse is implied.
Neil shows up in his grandmother’s rooms hoping to get his twin Nonnie’s husband, Charlie, to take him to Southampton before the arrival of Mike, who was supposed to leave the next day. However, his grandmother wants to turn him in, like she did last time, and Charlie doesn’t want to help him. To make matters worse, the walls of the rooms are very thin and people keep dropping by and trying to come in. Meanwhile, unbeknownst to the family, Mike is across the street all day watching the house.
I found Neil unlikable not so much because of what he is doing but how he acts. He is like the most timid heroine in a Gothic novel. He gasps loudly when he’s hiding, he keeps raising his voice despite many warnings about the nosy neighbors. He actually falls through the door when he is eavesdropping on his grandmother and her social worker. Basically, he’s an idiot with no control over himself. He acts more like a five-year-old than a twenty-year-old.
Of course, the book is about how he gets some stuffing to brace him up, but some of the book’s values are very dated. For example, Nonnie is supposed to tolerate Charlie’s infidelity because he’s jealous of her connection with her twin. And Neil has to get in a physical fight to gain some confidence. I also didn’t really find any of the characters to be that likable.
What? Me Read? 
Hmm, well, at least you haven’t added to my wishlist this time! 😉
All her memoirs seem to be good, though. I think there is one more memoir I haven’t read.
Oh dear, that doesn’t sound very successful. National Service was a very odd thing as you either did nothing in a hut for a couple of years or were sent off to the atom bomb experiments in the South Pacific or to the wars in Korea and Kenya!
That sounds awful. They kept the draft here in the States until the 1970’s. Of course, we were involved in Korea and Vietnam during those times. I think a lot of people had peaceful stints in other countries. My husband was based in Turkey in the 1960s.
Neil does sound annoying! Based on what I’ve read by Faviell so far, her memoirs seem to be better than her fiction.
That’s what it seems like to me.